Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Helping Others in Need. You should write at least 120 words and base you composition in the outline below: 1. 现在,在看到他人遇到困难时,很少有人去伸出援手; 2. 这个现象产生的原因; 3. 我的看法。 参考范文:
My View on Helping Others in Need
In modern society we are often sorry to see that people are reluctant to help others out, not to mention helping a stranger; offering a helping hand seems to be out of accord with the times.
Then what’s wrong with our society? Some people may say that facing skyrocketing housing prices, expensive medical expenditure and soaring commodity prices, they have no choice but to struggle to make a living, and thus it would be impossible to spare a hand to help others because it may bring them into trouble. Therefore, standing by indifferently is their only choice。
However, is it necessary to be selfish in order to survive, or in order to ensure that people do not take advantage of you? In my opinion, helping others brings a strong sense of accomplishment. What’s more, the evaluation criteria for judging one individual’s success should be modified so that offering a helping hand to people in need is encouraged and welcomed in our society all the time。
不利于社会的现象
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As is vividly/symbolically depicted in the picture/cartoon,we can notice that____ Through the thought-provoking illustration, the drawer aims to point out that attention has to be paid to ___. (解释现象,一两句话足矣). There is no telling how our future will precisely be if we allow this phenomenon continue as it is, however, absolutely will it be a prospect horrifies everyone. By that time, social stability will on the edge of precipice.
So to sum up, it is imperative for us to envisage realities and take effective measures before the situation turns from bad to worse. For one thing, our authorities should exercise strict control over___. (___). For another, we should cultivate the awareness of people that ___ is very vital to us. (___). As is often the case, it is our unconscious behavior that aggravate the problem. Only in this way can we curb the current evil phenomenon revealed in the picture and develop a harmonious social atmosphere.
附上一些句子可以用在模板中:
1: To serve as responsible stewards of the planet,we should reject the false behaviour and comply with the code of conduct consciously. 2: behaviors which harm public order or violate social ethics
3: we should respect the surrounding w living in and behavior as a literate person.
4: Nowadays, the absence of fundamental social ethic of many, if not the most, people may lead to a serious consequence.
5: 道德方面 ___has always been the traditional virtue of Chinese culture for thousands of years.
题目:跟聪明的人还是幽默的人交朋友
正文
Making friends are indispensable in everyone's life. There is no denying the fact that intelligent and humor are two vital characters of a good friend. Some people, however, may claim that it is better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor.As for me , I'm quite agree with it To begin with, intelligent friends often enlighten us and teach us something useful which is benefit for our life and career. It means that we will be inflenced by intelligent people and inclined to gain some characters from them. Most importantly, intelligent friends also have a proper goal. They manage their time for their goal, implementing it and complementing themselves, so they have a relatively high probability to success in their life. Staying long with a friend who is intelligent like this, we will be intelligent gruadually too. We can learn a lot of wholesome things from them, but a friend who have a good sense of humor just can brings us jokes. In our daily life, I thought intelligence is user than jokes.
Furthermore, an intelligent friend helps us more when we are in trouble. Compared with the humorous friends, an intelligent peole think more about the problem in a rational way. Useful suggestions and help from them will of much more importance to resolve the trouble we meet. For instance, if I was in trouble, those friends who are intelligent are more likely to put forth some constructive suggestions for me, while humorous friends may make a joke on me in a improper time. Although their jokes will relax me temporary, but in fact it is suggestion that resovle the problem at this moment and jokes do nothing.
Nevertheless, a humorous friend is also benefical to us. We will have fun and happiness when we stay with them, which probable leads a high efficiency in our work and studying.To sum up, it will be a pleasure to make friends both with intelligent people and humorous people. If I have to choose, however, I prefer to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor for the reason above. 题目:
Some students prefer to have their final grades determined by numerous small assignments, whereas others prefer to have their final grades determined by only a few large ones. Which do you prefer and why? 正文:
People have differing philosophies about how best to grade student performance. Some believe grades should come from a steady stream of small assignments, whereas others think one or two large assignments are enough to accurately reflect a student's academic abilities. As a student, I myself would prefer to be graded through several smaller assignments.
First of all, every student has bad days. If you are only scored on one or two large assignments, one badly-timed misfortune can completely wipe out your grade point average (GPA). For example, if you were to catch mononucleosis while working on a big project-something that has happened to at least a couple of my friends-your grade on that project would suffer dramatically and your GPA would plummet, even though such events are really outside of your control. By spreading your total score over a number of small assignments, your overall performance wouldn't have to take such a drastic hit if an individual assignment didn't work out.
Second of all, there's students will feel less pressure if they have to tackle several smaller assignments as opposed to a couple of larger assignments. There are two reasons for this. Firstly, larger assignments require more organizational skills and autonomy to complete successfully. One fifty-page essay, for example, is harder to write than fifty one-page essays. When writing large essays, you have to create an outline, prepare extensive notes, edit sections separately, and stitch different parts together in a way that appears seamless; for a small one-page assignment, the planning and back-and-forth editing required is considerably less. Secondly, having only a couple of large assignments will make students more nervous about screwing up. That kind of pressure can cause students to perform below their actual academic ability.
Admittedly, having a small number of large assignments would give students more day-to-day freedom. It would allow students to manage their schedules more independently. However, I still think that smaller assignments would benefit students more overall. When left to their own devices, students often put off work until the last minute. Then they stay up working the night before the deadline in order to complete their assignment on time. This kind of procrastination, if not caught early, can become
a crippling lifetime habit. By assigning students work at more regular intervals, such habits can be detected and corrected much sooner.
There are definitely benefits to both sides-a fewer number of large assignments can give students more decision-making power, whereas a greater number of small assignments can ease the academic pressure students feel and account for the bad luck they sometimes experience. Ultimately, however, the benefits of large assignments are outweighed by the tendency for bigger projects to encourage procrastination, so small assignments are still the best option. (458, Richard)
自身发展所需的品质
94-交友96-健康03-能力04-发展07-自信与挑战08-互助合作12-乐观态度
模板二(分类二)
As is vividly/symbolically depicted in the picture/cartoon,we can notice that____.[The caption in the drawing reads:\"\".] [Which may open the door to success.]
Undoubtedly, through the thought-provoking illustration, the drawer aims at reminding us the significance of ___. Owing to te quickening pace of life, competition goes increasingly fierce in all walks of life, and this makes it easier for us to encounter difficulties on our way to success. Then we need ___ to surmount the challenge. Once a person lose___,he can hardly attain success. (例子,实例或虚例). When all factors are considered, we may safely come to the conclusion that ___ really count in this competitive society. It deserves more attention and praising from the public. For one thing, our authorities should publicize the noble story of eminent people who attain outstanding achievement in their career, and set good examples for the children. For another, parents and teachers should cultivate children 's concept of the significance of ___ since childhood.
例子:For instance, when we come to a difficulty in our study, work and life. [We should strengthen our mind, which will lead to a powerful impetus, to solve the problem.] Thus we will take a solid step towards success. Also, when we look back to history, we can find that the elitists____. 模板三(分类三)
As is vividly/symbolically depicted in the picture/cartoon,we can notice that____.
Through the thought-provoking illustration, the drawer aims to point out the advantages and disadvantages of ___. As ___ is playing an increasing important role in our daily life nowadays. Just like a coin has two sides, ___ is a two-edged weapon. On one hand, ___. On the other hand, ___.
So to sum up, it is imperative for us to take effective measures aims at the disadvantages ___ bring to us. For one thing, our authorities should exercise strict control over ___. Person who attempt to destroy the normal order of ___ should be punished seriously, thus to establish a healthy ___ culture. For another, we should cultivate ourselves the capability of distinguishing right from wrong and utilize ___ moderately. Thus, we will enjoy a better life and develop a harmonious society.
话题3:延迟退休
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Retirement Age Be Postponed? You’d write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Your writing should be based on the following outline. 1. 近年来,推迟退休年龄引发人们热议 2. 推迟退休年龄有利也有弊 3. 我的看法
Based on a recent survey on the Internet, a majority of individuals admit that aging society will bring a variety of problems to their life. Along with the trend of longevity, it has become a trend for people to debate whether it is wise to postpone retirement age.
A number of individuals favor postponing the retirement age. In their eyes, it is this policy that enables the aging society to build up enough work-force. As a matter of fact, people in mounting numbers have come to realize this problem in an aging society. Even so, others hold a different view that postponing retirement age carries some risks. This policy can bring old people stress, but cannot arouse their enthusiasm for work, and cannot help them to enjoy their retirement pension.
I am convinced that we should take into account the wishes of old people. If those seniors have enthusiasm for work, we should educate, advocate and encourage them to work and perform their tasks; if not, it is advisable for the society to create a comfortable twilight for them. If we try our utmost to do so, the future of old people’ life will be promising and hopeful. (187 words)
Given is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon: an aged grandma sits in front of mirror, looking at “herself” in the mirror and saying to herself, “I feel rather lonely when my son goes to work and my grandson studies in school.”
首句功能为:引出图画;之后为图画内容描述,主要是四要素:人/物、动作、文字和环境,写出四要素中的两三点即可。
Obviously, this cartoon can be naturally associated with the significance of children’s accompany for aged parents: if elderly people intend to enjoy happiness,it is advisable for their children to spend more time in parents. In contemporary society, it has become a trend for young people to be busy with their work and study. Meanwhile, an increasing number of youngsters find it difficult to have spare time to accompany lonely parents. However, it is adult children’s accompany that enables aged parents to build up adequate hope, love and enthusiasm for life. As a matter of fact, young people in large numbers have not come to realize the loneliness of aged people.
二段首句:图画联系主题;之后if句为图画简单评论;in contemporary society一句为图画所暗含的社会现象;meanwhile一句为相关人+具体感受;however之后为强调句式,论述意义;尾句是万能总结。
As a youngster, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for us to accompany aged parents, no matter how busy we are. Accordingly, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to love, respect and care all elderly people. (196 words)
尾段首句:观点;二句建议;尾句展望未来。
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