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江西(九江县）2016高考英语短文改错二轮训练及答案
短文改错
When I first learned to write in English， I ran into 1. _______
many difficulties. The main problem was in that I 2。 _______
always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything 3. _______
into English。 My teacher advised me to keep my diary。 4。 _______
I followed her advice and should put down 100 words 5. _______
or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on 6. _______
paper as I was learning to express me in simple English。 7. _______
One day I wrote a little story and showed to my 8. _______
teacher。 She liked it very much and reads it to the class。 9。 _______
They all said the story was a good one. Their word were 10。 ______
a great encouragement to me。
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答案及解析 1。 此行无错。
2。 删去 in。根据句意及句子结构, 此处为表语从句。
3。 anything 改为 everything.此处为肯定句， anything 意为“任何一件事”， 侧重个体; 而 everything 意为“一切事情”， 侧重整体。
4. my 改为 a。keep a diary 为固定短语, 意为“记日记”。 5。 删去 should。and 连接两个并列的平行结构， 前后时态均为一般过去时态。
6. talk 改为 talking。enjoy doing 为固定用法。故此处必须用动名词作宾语。
7. me 改为 myself。express oneself 为固定短语。
8. showed 后加 it。show 为及物动词， 后面应接宾语。
9。 reads 改为 read。and 连接两个并列的平行结构， 前后时态均为一般过去时态。
10。 word 改为 words。根据句意, 此处应为“他们的话语， ”用 words.
短文改错（10分)
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改
增加:在缺词出加一个漏字符号（︿)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用（\\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改侯的词。
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注意：只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起)不计分.
Never shall I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu. One Monday morning, when she entered the classroom， we found out that she was a young and beautiful lady. Then she introduced her and said they shouldn’t call her Teacher Liu but Miss Liu. Later, she let us go to the blackboard and said something about ourselves in English in turns。 When it was my turn， I felt too shy that I didn’t dare to say anything before the class。 She went up to me and said kind, “Don’t be afraid。 I believe you can do well。” At last， I went to the blackboard. She praised me for that I had done。 改错 参
giving—given 去掉out her---herself they—--we said---—say turns-——turn too—-—so kind--—kindly do后加it that---what
短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分）
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
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注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2。 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起）不计分。
I was born in a farmer family in Suizhong county, Liaoning Province in June, in 1965． When I was a child, I dreamed of flying in the sky． I joined the army in June， 1983． In 1992， I was sent to
the air force base． In August, 1996, I was one of the first 14 members
from 1，500 pilots through the physical examination． I worked hardly，
because I was among the first astronauts of our country in 1998 。
I was chosen one of the first man space aircraft astronauts later． On Oct．15, 2003, I successfully fly to space, circled
around the earth about 14 circle and then returned ． I was honored
to have given the chance to be the first Chinese to travel in space．
参短文改错 1．farmer改为farmer,s 2． 去掉1965前面的in 3． an air force base。 4． 把hardly改为hard
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5．把because改为so 6．在chosen后加as 7． manned 8． flew
9． 把circle改为circles 10． 在have后面加been
短文改错（共10小题;每小题1份，满分10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正： 此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
Today is Sunday .I′ve been in Canada for two months .
This is the first time that I′ve been away my family for such a 76。
long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, I′ve 77.
soon got used to live without my parents around。 Katia,like 78.
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many other Russian girls， are nice and lively。 We became 79。
friends shortly after we meet each other。 Although her English 80。
is a little hardly to understand， we enjoy chatting and we 81。
usually talk a lot about our own family. We’re both surprised 82.
that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different。 Now， 83。
we are planning a small party for the next Sunday.There ，Katia 84.
will introduce me to some of her friends,one of who has been 85。
to China several times。I just can't wait。
【答案】第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） Today is Sunday .I′ve been in Canada for two months .
This is the first time that I′ve been away ︿ my family for such a 76。 from
long time. With the help of Katia， a roommate of me, I′ve 77。 mine
soon got used to live without my parents around。 Katia，like 78。 living
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many other Russian girls， are nice and lively. We became 79。 is
friends shortly after we meet each other。 Although her English 80. met
is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we 81. hard
usually talk a lot about our own family。 We’re both surprised 82. families
that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different。 Now， 83。 and
we are planning a small party for the next Sunday.There ，Katia 84. the
will introduce me to some of her friends,one of who has been 85。 whom
短文改错。
Last Saturday we had a party at home. Dad’s friends come1.________ along with their families. Since Mom was not at home， Dad2.________ and I had to prepare everything， so it turned out such a miracle3。________
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that they did make it！ Everything went perfectly fine。4.________ A lot of kids who came that day。 I had the most wonderful time5.________
with Steven。 It was just amazed to find someone so much6。________ like me。 We had a lot of things by common。 The time seemed7.________
short to me， and I wished we could have had some more time8.________
to continue the conversation。 Hopeful we're going on9。________ a trip together next summer, and also summer after next.10。________ 答案与解析：
1．come→came 整篇文章为一般过去时，应把come改为came。 2．√
3．so→but 前后语境为转折关系，应把so改为but。
4．they→we 根据上文可知作者使用了第一人称,此处指作者和父亲俩人，因此应把they改为we。
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5．去掉who 本句为简单句，去掉who。
6．amazed→amazing 主语为it，应用amazing作表语，表示“令人惊异的”.
7．by→in 固定短语have。。.in common表示“有……相同之处”。 8．去掉had wish后的宾语从句用虚拟语气，谓语应用情态动词＋动词原形，因此把had去掉。
9．Hopeful→Hopefully 副词hopefully放在句首，表示“希望\"副词作状语修饰整个句子。
10．在also后加the next summer指明年夏天,the summer after next指后年夏天。
